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Barry's avatar

Six more-

Personal demons. Some where loud neckties.

“Johnny! Don’t!” Nothing to lose now.

“Good cop?” Left hook. “Maybe not.”

“Follow that car.” Heart pounding. Showtime!

The city sleeps. But it snores.

I'm dead. Wait, it gets worse.

-Lazlo

Maxwell Vagus's avatar

Nice! I'll keep those in mind for an upcoming episode. Should the first one be "wear" instead of "where"?

Barry's avatar

Yes, wear. Thanks!

Barry's avatar

Loved it. Thanks!

-Lazlo

Clentin's avatar

Very good, interesting. Good episode length! Book looks like it will be a novel about a man trying to find himself!